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<p>Back in May I had two pieces in successive copies of The People's
Friend. On the old site someone suggested I post one of them for those
who didn't see a copy but it has taken until now to track the originals
down. A change of computers since submission caused the confusion.</p>
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<p>When
my son read the published piece his only comment was, "Pity about the
typo." I am delighted to say that on reading the original the error was
not mine so thoughts of his mother becoming senile are grossly
exaggerated. I'll put the solution at the end for those who read the
magazine and missed it as several other people had done before my son
pointed it out.</p>
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<p><span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong>"Ahoy There!" - The People's Friend (9-5-2009)</strong></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">A popular treat during our summer holidays with relatives
was to spend a day on the Royal Pier at Southampton.
Unlike many seaside resort piers the Royal Pier was not a scene of arcade
attractions. In the fifties and sixties you could always be sure of seeing
plenty of shipping movements as the great ocean liners visited the port.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The pier itself had many attractions, as there was a small
shop, a cafeteria, from which a tray of tea could be taken out if required, and
plenty of seating. For adults, the Mecca Ballroom housed in the Pier Pavilion,
was a popular venue. A line of shelters ran down the centre of the pier forming
a wind break on blustery days. The curved cast-iron seats that lined both sides
of the pier made a great base from which to set off on our explorations. Whilst
our mother and aunt chatted, read and maybe did their knitting we were free to
roam so long as we remained in sight.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The planks of the pier had quite large cracks between
allowing the movement of the water to be observed. Sometimes there was debris
from the ships being floated through the stanchions but more often than not
there was simply the gentle lapping of water against the uprights as the tide
ebbed and flowed. We held tightly to any pocket money we had taken along as the
cracks were large enough to swallow most coins.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">From the end of the pier you may see fishermen with their
rods and lines patiently awaiting a bite. I don’t know how successful they were
but do recall on one occasion, whilst we were kneeling up on the seats to get a
better view over Southampton Water, that we saw a whole mass of jellyfish pass
under the pier. Like a bizarre game of Pooh sticks we rushed to the other side
to see them emerge. We could see their tentacles and saw how the bell filled
propelling them along. We noted four small circles on the bell. The jellyfish
swam just below the surface of the murky water that shone rainbow colours with
the oil that had been spilled and one wonders just how healthy it was for them.
However, wild life was not our objective.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The daily local paper, the Southern Evening Echo, printed
lists of ships arriving or departing the next day in their diary section. We
knew you could generally see a Cunard liner, either the Queen Elizabeth or
Queen Mary (the originals) on a Monday or a Thursday, as these were their
arrival and departure days. Other ships were less predictable. Sometimes we saw
a ship called the America
that had distinctive, finned funnels, and you may see a Union-Castle ship on
its way either to or from South
Africa. These ships docked in the New Dock
area and, as they had to pass the end of the pier, you had a better look at
them. I recall the Edinburgh Castle and Pendennis
Castle amongst others.
The hull was a pleasant shade of lilac with white superstructure.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The Cunard liners, which docked at the Ocean Terminal, did
not come up as far as the pier itself. The deep water channel was marked with a
string of buoys, though, and you had a good view of the tugs turning the mighty
ships to enter the dock itself. For this they had to overrun the dock and then
turn in. There were generally four tugs involved with two pushing and two
pulling at any one time. These manoeuvres took quite a while and must have been
a poignant time for passengers as the end was so close yet tantalisingly slow.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Occasionally, if we were very fortunate, we were taken on a
harbour cruise that took you close up to the side of some of the liners and
made you really appreciate their massive size. The tiny trip boats bobbed up
and down even in the comparative calm of the docks and the splendour of those
liners was somewhat overpowered by the stench of oil that surrounded them at
sea level. Long streaks of rust could be seen below the many pipes that lead
from the side and to some extent the ships lost their impressiveness with this
display of vulnerability to the elements. I remember making one trip around
dusk and the sight of the massive liners all lit up was quite magical.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Besides the great ocean liners there was plenty of other
marine activity to keep us occupied. The regular Red Funnel ferries to the Isle of Wight left from alongside the pier and there were
cargo vessels and oil tankers as the huge Fawley oil refinery was on the
opposite bank. Early on an occasional flying boat was seen in action although
most of the time these were at anchor in Southampton Water and on the pier
itself a Supermarine Seaplane was displayed. This forerunner of the Spitfire
had broken the World Air Speed record over Southampton Water in 1931.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The pier shop sold postcards of the most frequent visitors
to Southampton and we often purchased one if
we had seen a different ship. Such simple pleasures seemed to satisfy us then.
We always took a picnic of sandwiches and cakes and crisps but tea was
purchased from the cafeteria as and when required, which seemed quite often in
the case of the adults.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On one memorable occasion the Royal Yacht Britannia came
into port and the pier was quite crowded on her arrival and departure days. The
demand for harbour trips was high but we managed to reach the front of the
queue eventually and we were part of a flotilla of boats following at a
distance as she left port. Even though we couldn’t get as close as usual to the
boats that day it was a wonderful trip.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">At the end of the day everything had to be packed up into
the bags and, after a last ice cream, we set off to catch a bus back to our
grandmother’s house.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">(And the typo? Apparently they thought finned Tunnels rather than Funnels adorned the ship.)</p>
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<p>Back in 2005 I sent an article and a couple of ideas to a local magazine. I
learned a rapid lesson. The editor liked the article but it included areas
outside of the remit for the publication. He did accept another article on a
different subject but I learned to do more thorough research on titles before
submitting.</p>
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<p>The article sat in its file until early this year when the editor sent me a
random sample copy. I noticed the magazine was now distributed in the area formerly
off limits so I emailed him asking if he might now be interested in the piece.
He requested the article by return but I heard nothing. Then two other local
titles merged making them a possible target for the piece. Out of courtesy I
emailed the first editor again to see if he was still interested before
approaching the new title. He replied by return, again requesting the article
and at this third time of asking as it were he accepted it providing I could
send the photos by the following Tuesday (this was Thursday) for inclusion in
the September issue. Despite preparing for a weekend away I gathered the
material together and posted it off first class and crossed my fingers.</p>
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<p>This morning the postman brought a copy of the September magazine with the
article included. The editor did manage to get my name correct on the article but
the contents still has the dreaded added e on my name.</p>
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<p>However, two lessons. One, always check the title out thoroughly before
submitting and two, persistence sometimes pays. I can even rewrite the piece at
some later date for a different area using their local examples.</p>
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<p>Yesterday our latest issue of Best of British magazine was delivered and one piece was very familiar.</p>
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<p>Back in 2006, at the end of a story involving cycling, the editor requested other cycling stories. I had a piece written by my father describing the lengthy cycle rides involved in his courtship of my mother, travelling from where he worked to her home town each weekend. He had tried to have it published in magazines himself but had not been successful. I typed it up and sent it in, explaining it was the work of my late father. I received the standard reply that they would like to retain it for possible publication. At least this time it was not rejected outright.</p>
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<p>Yesterday his dream came true as it made it into print and I have to admit to feeling quite emotional about it. My father had some work published in his local county magazine and lots of letters, too. In fact his success was one reason I decided to give it a go. I just know he would have been so pleased to see this particular story in print.</p>
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