The site email system is not working too well. I've had three people try to contact me through the system, and the emails didn't make it and my reply to two others never got there.

If you entered Novel Beginnings and you would like detailed critique of your entry, please email me on Dwrob96@aol.com.

The cost is £10 (payable via paypal) for which I will provide a detailed analysis of the pluses and minuses and in-line comments on potential improvements/rewording where I feel it would help your work. I regret I will not discuss why your work succeeded or otherwise in Novel Beginnings.

I disappear on a fortnight's holiday in less than two weeks, so if you want to take advantage of this offer, do so now.