Hello,

I have posted a small part of my chapter in the arena.

I haven't been on here for a while and I am hoping my writing has progressed ( Slighty!)

I am also trying to create this book which will be filled with humour ( maybe not to everyones taste) but without the feed back I will not know my errors.

I understand many have writing tasks of their own, but I  would be very gratefull for any coments

Thank you

Nicky