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FOR WILL WHO WASN’T THERE TO SHARE THE MOMENT

I wrote this for my son who rang while I was walking the Lakeland fells. He wanted to know what it was like!

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This day Lakeland smiled
and curbed her wild
excess of wind and rain and gale
to tell a gentler tale.

Sun and shadow contrive by chance
to weave a skittish, playful dance
and there upon the velvet fell,
cast a mythic, magic spell.

Bewitched, beguiled,
astonished, as a child,
I heard confided in the grass,
the whispered secrets of the past.

Of pony men that wend their way
on winding tracks, both sure and fey.
Of ancient tribes which on sacred ground
blessed the land with stones around.

Then other sights from near and far,
a tumbling stream, bedecked with stars.
A shower of twisting, spinning leaves,
skipping and dancing on the breeze.

Yet never far from wandering eye,
the silent, stilly waters lie.
A sheet of glass from heaven sent
to mirror back the heart’s content.

And on this day when Lakeland smiled,
daily cares for just a while,
sank beneath the glittering glass
and drowned the sorrows of the past.

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186 Words . sue kendrick , add to friends . 2008-10-09 . 13:15:53 . Permalink . Email . 51 views  7 feedbacks

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Comment from: linda d [Member] Email · http://www.writelink.co.uk/blogs/linda
Lovely!
PermalinkPermalink 2008-10-09 @ 13:35
Comment from: Thoughtfox [Visitor] Email
Good poem but I find the non-capitalization at the beginning of each line an irritant.
It lends a shred-torn appearance to the poem.
PermalinkPermalink 2008-10-09 @ 13:47
Comment from: bob scotney [Member] Email
Superb! I could visual what you saw and ended up quite envious that I wasn't there.
PermalinkPermalink 2008-10-09 @ 14:31
Comment from: greenygrey [Member] Email · http://www.greenygrey.co.uk
Great stuff Sue, very evocative.
PermalinkPermalink 2008-10-10 @ 10:15
Comment from: sue kendrick [Member] Email · http://www.suekendrick.co.uk
Thanks everyone for your comments. It was one of the best days of the year and unusually for me, I wrote most of the poem in one go which made a nice keepsake of the occasion.
PermalinkPermalink 2008-10-10 @ 16:56
Comment from: gillyflower [Member] Email
Good poem Sue, & especially like the final stanza. I liked the non-capitalisation of words, but that's probably because most of my poems are written in similar style. Great photo too.
PermalinkPermalink 2008-10-12 @ 06:23
Comment from: sue kendrick [Member] Email · http://www.suekendrick.co.uk
Thanks Gilly, it was a perfect day for taking photos as well!
PermalinkPermalink 2008-10-13 @ 10:12

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