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EARLY ONE MORNING

It's early morning and I'm standing in our yard watching the dawn come up. Pale, fingers poke through the trees like a pink glove and point towards the stables. Two nodding heads make soft, wickering noises as I approach.

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I feed and rug the ponies and turn them out into the near paddock then move on to the cows. Usually there are two of us, today I'm alone. Carting straw and hay for the beast makes me sweat, but it is good to be part of this endless round of turning seasons.

The smell of good hay has trapped the echoes of long summer days and as I spread the bright straw I remember mist and fat blackberries and the turning of the year. I think how thin the thread that binds the present to the past and the future is even more nebulous, a mere snails trail away.

The day is full bright now and sun is flooding the yard. It's warmer than of late, could there be a hint of spring in the air?

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176 Words . sue kendrick , add to friends . 07/02/08 . 10:59:58 pm . Permalink . Email . 279 views  10 feedbacks

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Comment from: mater [Member] Email · http://www.freewebs.com/theapprenticewriter/
I'm right there in the yard with you - drawing in those smells. Yes, there are signs of spring round here, too - although my senses are telling me it's too early. There's still winter to be had!
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Comment from: lorraine [Member] Email · http://www.lorrainemace.com/
Sounds wonderful, Sue. I love the line: I think how thin the thread that binds the present to the past and the future is even more nebulous, a mere snails trail away.
PermalinkPermalink 08/02/08 @ 09:34
Comment from: sue kendrick [Member] Email · http://www.suekendrick.co.uk
Thanks both, it's been another lovely dawn today as well! Lorraine I was just beginning to hit a poetic stride when I wrote that, isn't it odd how the mere act of writing without direction can open up the wells of creativity?
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Comment from: marilyn [Member] Email · http://www.writelink.co.uk/blogs/marilyn
This is definitly confirmation that spring is just around the corner, Sue. I can feel and smell it both from your prose and in reality.
PermalinkPermalink 08/02/08 @ 18:47
Comment from: jak [Member] · jakill-jeansmusings.blogspot.com
What a lovely word picture, Sue. a change for the better in the weather is always inspiring, I find.
PermalinkPermalink 08/02/08 @ 20:10
Comment from: greenygrey [Member] Email · http://www.greenygrey.co.uk
Yeh, lovely words and great scene setting Sue.

Another beautiful morning today, so can also imagine your work day and the mood lift and heightened senses you get from sunshine and warmth.
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Comment from: sarah_james [Member] Email · http://www.milltech-systems.co.uk
Lovely description. Time for another Early One Morning competition maybe?
PermalinkPermalink 09/02/08 @ 20:36
Comment from: sue kendrick [Member] Email · http://www.suekendrick.co.uk
Thanks everyone. I hope you are all enjoying the weather, it's making me quite wistful for summer! Sarah I hadn't thought of running Early One Morning again, but might well do that later in the year. I've got the next competition all ready lined up, it's something we haven't had before so keep watching!
PermalinkPermalink 10/02/08 @ 14:15
Comment from: gillyflower [Member] Email
Your description is reality here at the moment for me Down Under. Especially those blackberries. Paddocks are dotted with hay bales, & my fingers are still stained from picking another icecream container-full of blackberries while walking my dog this morning. I'm continually surprised by how many there are (and how fat!) considering the drought becomes more serious with each passing day.
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Comment from: sue kendrick [Member] Email · http://www.suekendrick.co.uk
It all seems along way, away at the moment Gilly. The weather has reverted to cold, dreary greyness and the only flowers poking through are a few crocus. Still we're moving towards summer and they say it is going to be nice again come the weekend. Hope you get some rain soon! Where in Australian are you?
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