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I am an Oxford modern languages graduate and former journalist, now a full-time mother, poet and short story writer. I love reading, writing, swimming, squash, walking, mulled wine, watching television dramas or films and belly dancing.

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Cumulus

A copy of my poem Cumulus, which won first prize in this year's writelink Spring Fever contest.

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Cumulus

by
Sarah James

Even before we met, Thomas collected clouds;
he could taste rain on his tongue
simply by looking at the right sky.

He'd greet each formation like his sheep,
whistling as he recognised its unique shape and mix
of white, grey, black; individual as every new lamb.

“Cirrus, altocumulus, cumulonimbus…Betsy, Pippa, Lou...”
He’d recite names, munching syllables like marshmallows,
while his sheep munched methodically

through mud-stained grass, only stopping
to collect under trees by the gate
when a nimbostratus threatened rain.

They’d huddle there as if hoping,
like me, for a white fluffy cumulus
big enough to carry us far away.

Instead, spring lambs gave birth to winter ewes
and the weather brought more woolly skies.
Rain collected regularly in buckets, overflowing

across the farm’s loose-tiled kitchen,
where the air tasted of mildew,
and I grew tired of waiting.

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Comment from: greenygrey [Member] Email · http://www.greenygrey.co.uk
Nice poems Sarah, and especially this one. Some nice gold-tipped clouds yesterday...and monsoon ones half an hour later!
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Comment from: marilyn [Member] Email · http://www.writelink.co.uk/blogs/marilyn
This is brilliant and written with great skill. Two of my favourite lines are: “Cirrus, altocumulus, cumulonimbus…Betsy, Pippa, Lou...”
He’d recite names, munching syllables like marshmallows,...

An absolute pleasure to read.
PermalinkPermalink 05/09/08 @ 15:25
Comment from: sarah_james [Member] Email · http://www.milltech-systems.co.uk
Thank you both. :-)
PermalinkPermalink 05/09/08 @ 19:13
Comment from: mater [Visitor] Email · http://www.writelink.co.uk/blogs/mater
Not only beautiful poetry, Sarah - but knowledge behind it - and thinking outside the box. Great!!
PermalinkPermalink 06/09/08 @ 13:37
Comment from: sarah_james [Member] Email · http://www.milltech-systems.co.uk
Thank you. The moral boost is great at the moment, Marit, as I seem to have picked up some sort of bug and am feeling pretty low physically!
PermalinkPermalink 06/09/08 @ 20:52

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