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This piece is as much a puzzle as a piece of flash fiction, though it was inspired by the message for 30th November on the Messages website. But would you be able to guess the right answer?

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"I've left you first..." Sir Humphrey paused in his writing to chuckle mischievously to himself. Then he continued in his pristine, looping handwriting: "...choice of five pieces of jewellery. Four of them are worthless, one is worth more than the rest of my estate. When making your choice, you must explain correctly your reasons for picking that particular piece."

Sir Humphrey laid down his pen and imagined the dramatic gasp there would be as his five nieces reached this point of their identical personal letter accompanying his will. His lawyer had strict instructions on how to recognise the niece choosing the right piece for the right reasons. And they were to have only one hour in one room to work it out. Would any of them remember enough, know him enough to do it?

He picked up the tulip brooch with its bright red stone, almost as beautiful as the real thing, his favourite flower. Next to it, he personally thought his mother's multi-stoned swirling pendant was the prettiest of the five pieces. But the fountain brooch with its sparkling diamonds, or was it some other stone, reminded him of the stream where he loved to walk. Then there was the engraved gold ring with his initials that he had been given by his late wife or the pearl pendant he'd had handmade for their fortieth anniversary.

The trouble was, Sir Humphrey chuckled to himself, that there were potentially good reasons for choosing every single piece. But did any of his supposedly doting heirs actually know him well enough to guess the right reason? Or would the local cat home be buying new premises?

Of course, all it really needed was for one of them to remember how he loved crosswords, anagrams and the like. Then if they read it aloud, he chuckled again. "I've left you thirst choice..."


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Comment from: jak [Member] · jakill-jeansmusings.blogspot.com
My answer is no. Intriguing all the same.
PermalinkPermalink 05/12/07 @ 09:36
Comment from: maureen [Member] · http://www.maureen-vincent-northam.co.uk
I've been scratching my head over this!
PermalinkPermalink 05/12/07 @ 11:05
Comment from: sarah_james [Member] Email · http://www.milltech-systems.co.uk
Thanks Mo and Jak, That probably means it doesn't work! (Just as well I never posted it on the Messages site!)
The thirsty choice was supposed to mean the piece depicting/evoking something you might drink from...ie the fountain.
Essentially, I was just playing around with words. The phrase from the original message which inspired this was "I (have) left you first." I wanted to change first to thirst but I couldn't come up with a decent story!
PermalinkPermalink 05/12/07 @ 11:12
Comment from: maureen [Member] · http://www.maureen-vincent-northam.co.uk
I had thought about the fountain but wondered if it was a red herring! I even considered tulip as that's the shape of a glass along with the ruby (port - the bright red stone) but after taking 'port' from tulip brooch, I ended up with uliboch, lol. Swirling also made me think of liquid/drink. Me brain hurts.
PermalinkPermalink 05/12/07 @ 12:08
Comment from: sarah_james [Member] Email · http://www.milltech-systems.co.uk
Sorry, Mo! Next time I post a puzzle (though there probably won't be a next time!) I'll post some virtual paracetamol as well!
PermalinkPermalink 05/12/07 @ 12:19
Comment from: marilyn [Member] Email · http://www.writelink.co.uk/blogs/marilyn
I thought the clue was in the word 'thirst' but wasn't sure...so I haven't done badly have I?
PermalinkPermalink 05/12/07 @ 13:10
Comment from: sarah_james [Member] Email · http://www.milltech-systems.co.uk
No, M, spot on. I think I've probably made things more confusing by refering to it as a puzzle rather than a piece of flash fiction. But there again, it's not flash fiction either. To be honest, I'm not sure what it is!
PermalinkPermalink 05/12/07 @ 13:23

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