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Red Indian

The ninth poem from my poetry collection Conception.

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Red Indian

It happens every night around dusk.
We try to lie him down
under the triangular tepee
of curtains suspended above his crib.
But he awakes instantly, whooping war cries.
His screams pierce our ears like arrows
as his arms swing wildly,
banging his invisible tom-tom.
We smoke a peace pipe of lullabies
and talk him down onto the plains
of his activity mat arched
by smiling suns and sunny flowers.
But it’s a temporary, uneasy truce.
He moans, his restlessness tapered
only momentarily by a trot
in the saddle of his bouncy chair.
When the pace slows, he grimaces,
face screwed up like a totem-pole carving,
and the war cries recommence.
This Red Indian will not let go the fight so fast.
Our spirits grow heavy with desperation.
We restock our bows,
light another pipe,
but still he will not give up.
So, failing to calm him, we resort
to the one remaining course of action
and ambush him into our arms.
This done, he cedes the battle quietly:
hands up, he surrenders finally to sleep
on the slope of Daddy’s chest
and we rejoice in our hard-won peace,
all the while knowing
it is really us who have given in.

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Comment from: marilyn [Member] Email · http://www.writelink.co.uk/blogs/marilyn
Hopefully, first time parents will read this before the birth-to-be, which I can only imagine will give them great comfort in knowing what to expect and that they're not the only ones to have been awakened every 2 hours!
PermalinkPermalink 22/08/07 @ 23:44
Comment from: sarah_james [Member] Email · http://www.milltech-systems.co.uk
Thank you, M. I think sleep deprivation's one of the hardest parts of parenthood! Still, it doesn't last for long. :-)
PermalinkPermalink 23/08/07 @ 07:49
Comment from: lezh [Member] Email · http://writelink.co.uk/blogs/Lez
Doesn't last for long???? I wish someone had told that to our son when he was 18 months and still going strong 5 times a night! My wife even insisted he be baptised in case that was the cause. And talk about God give ME strength: afterwards God gave HIM strength to cry even louder for even longer!

The only fault I can find with your excellent poem, Sarah, is that it's missing a thousand verses.

Still, at least he cured us of having any more, for which my nerves and wallet are truly thankful.
PermalinkPermalink 23/08/07 @ 19:19
Comment from: sarah_james [Member] Email · http://www.milltech-systems.co.uk
Shush Lez,
I'm trying to reassure any new parents that read this!
It's funny how different children are. Our first didn't sleep through till nine months but our second was nearer five. However, I do half to admit they are intermittent bad sleepers and still get up very early, usually around 5.30am, whatever time we put them to bed. It's the biggest thing taht stops us having more - oh, and the cost, as you say!
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